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LORD RAIN ON ME.mp3  (File Size: 4059KB - Downloads: 552)

Hey Jerry, I just listened to this track, and I like it a lot.  It has a very smooth, captivating flow, and is an easy foundation for lyrics.  The only thing is that I listening for a bridge to come in.  Not every song incorporates one.  That, I know.  But I just thought that one would have fit rather nicely in this song.  The lack of one isn’t a retraction, mind you.  I just kept hearing one coming up :).

Again, though - very nice.

Thanks brother, I did that track for a young singer that pulled out at the last minute, and now wishes she had it before I released it on soundcloud.
I never got a vibe for a bridge, but your right, a bridge would be nice somewhere in there.
Creating music is hard on me these days because I’m in lots of pain, and am not into goin to my pill pushing doctor lol, I just don’t like medications as they can be dangerous with all their side effects and such.

Thanks for listening.

Enjoyed listening, smooth track, would love to hear w/lyrics. I always enjoy your music FM.

Thanks man, I’m not into singing these day, I lost that talent many years ago.
As that say, if you don’t use it, you lose it.